Thursday, May 8, 2014

Blog 25

Final Draft of Research Paper




John Acito
Dr. Chandler
Eng. 3029
5/8/14
Final Draft
How Student Loan Debt Drives Cultural Narratives

Introduction
In today’s society you have to attend college to be successful, and it is your parent’s responsibility to pay for it. These two cultural stories drive the student loan debt narrative that affects many aspects of a student’s life. The education system is built in a way that diverts blame from their unfair practices and lenders towards parents and students. This study will shed light on; students preparation in attending college, their interactions with the loan process, the fear of loan debt and how it affects the American Dream and other decisions associated with school, stress between family members relating to affording school, and how the phrase, “Loans allow the opportunity for everyone to get a college degree” is both misleading and hindering the current societal mindset on higher education.

Literature Review
Eric Best published “Debt and the American Dream” in July of 2012. His article focuses on the hindrances that the housing and education markets put on the attaining of the American Dream. His aim is to poke holes in the cultural narratives that we have created. His first section is titled “Not All Bubbles are Created Equal”, and deals with how the housing and education markets become inflated with little oversight in prevention.  He states, “Home ownership and college education have been identified as signals of middle class living in America, and there is broad support for making them widely available.” This shows how expectations of what it means to live out the American Dream drives the market for these industries.
            Best then dives into his next heading “Deregulation and Subsidization” which looks at how strong Americans value education and home ownership. “Home ownership and education are considered sacred ideals, and support for them is almost universal.” The fact that Best says they are universal shows the stigma these two industries have over proposing better judgments to reform the markets. He then goes on to say, “In addition to future benefits (home values and increased income from education), there is a positive social signal sent by home ownership or college education that lasts over time. The benefits of home ownership and college education are deeply engrained in American culture.” This stigma exemplifies what it means to live out the American Dream. It also shows how current students lack the foresight to really know what their loans will mean when they graduate. Students treat their loans as future investments that will pay themselves off rather than devise a plan for paying back the debt. Loans force us to look too far down the road to care about what we are signing up for which builds off of the stigma that students are uneducated on the loan process.
            Throughout the rest of Best’s article he discusses, “the enticing nature of how we spread out the costs of education and the future profits these certain degrees could make, and how that blurs our current financial stability.” He also poses a very frightening observation that not only does the government want to build a smarter youth, but they also want to profit off of them. He claims,
“Laws for student loans such as the Higher Education Act of 1965 (HEA) and the Federal Direct Student Loan Program of 1993 (FDSLP) fundamentally changed access to college. Amazingly, the Higher Education Opportunity Act of 2008 even tied the number of low interest college loans made to low income students into the standards for CRA compliance, practically forcing banks to participate in subsidized lending.”
            This shows how it is a cultural expectation for kids to go to college and that the banks have been forced to lend money to students to pay for their education. Overall, Best’s findings shed light on a lot of stereotypes and stigmas associated with student loans and the educational system. However, he groups both the education and housing markets together in discussing these narratives, and studies have yet to be done on specifically student loan debts and their social effects on students and their families. There is plenty of statistical data out there related to student loans but none fully address and focus on the narratives and pressures that apply to this field.

Methods
This study examines the current role of student loan debt and the cultural and societal aspects that affect student decisions. The purpose of this study is to see why it is accepted and socially normal to accrue debt to attain a college degree. This study also addresses pressures and fears of debt in life’s daily decisions. My participant is referred to as D.
My participant was a great person to interview for a bunch of different reasons; D is 1 of 4 kids to attend college in her family, she has a reference of an older sister who has gone through the college system, she recently graduated, she recently had to start paying back her loans, still lives at home and is on the cusp of trying to move out into the world on her own. These are all themes that I addressed in the interview and she more than met the needs for the research.
The interview was done in her house at the kitchen table a setting that made her feel very comfortable. A cell phone, a notebook, and a pen were used in recording the interview. The aim was to show how a student, who has recently graduated, is coping with her new identity as a graduate, and how the loan process is currently affecting her decisions. A copy of the questions is in the appendix, and the interview ran about 17 minutes.

 Data/Analysis
From a dissection of the language D uses, it shows her fears, pressures, and stresses associated with the college process. These are feelings that most students have to go through and deal with, and unfortunately, her language implies that attending college is a struggle and a battle. For something that is supposed to be helping making kids better off later in life, the pressures are affecting their decision making process and could possibly make them go into fields that make them unhappy in their adult lives.

Excerpt # 1: Why we need to go to college.

D: yea well it was a really high stress time for a lot of people in my grade but my goal was to not be stressed, I kind of, I kind of wanted to go to a bigger school were as some of my colleagues applied to 4 plus schools or even 8 different schools, um, I decided to apply to just Rutgers and Temple, I didn’t do any extensive research really, I didn’t visit any of the schools.”

When looking strictly at the language and how things were said, it seems like D didn’t want to admit to being stressed out in High School during college application time. In this section her hesitation and lack of conviction didn’t make me believe she was stress free during this big change in her life. She claims she tried to stay stress free but as soon as she states this she stuttered with “I kind of, I kind of”. This may be her gathering her thoughts for the next statement but there is more evidence that she was indeed stressed out during this time in her life. The main thing that adds to stress and anxiety is being unprepared on a subject.
In D’s case they only thing she was certain of, that she wanted to go to a big school. She made the claim, “I didn’t do any extensive research really, I didn’t visit any of the schools” which shows that she may have been stressed out. The fact that she mentions her colleagues applying to many more many schools than her may lend the notion that her colleagues actions could be making her feel like an outsider for not applying to so many schools. In High School, imitation of your friends and peers is a big social pressure and although D does not come out and say it, the language and tone suggests these societal pressures may have weighed on her. Fitting in and being part of the “in” crowd is very important in high school. This is a very childish and immature way of thinking but as we grow up does this thinking change? After high school the only way to fit in is to attend college. This societal norm looms over the heads of children across America to go to college. Continuing this thinking, we are not only going to college because it is good for us, but because it is what everyone else does immediately after high school.

Excerpt # 2: Parents Helping in the College Process.

Me: like any pressures or anything to go to college?
D uh I didn’t feel any pressure per say. It wasn’t like I had to go but I wanted to. I feel if I had said I didn’t want to go that there would have been some push back from my parents.
Me so your parents were very stern about you going to college?
D um well I think it was kind of understood…it just seemed natural to go to college and I wanted to go into higher education and it was supported
Me was the loan process ever explained to you like going into college or even in high school prepping for college?
D um no um when it came down to me getting accepted It was understood that I would take out a loan…
Me who told you about … that you had to take out a loan
D my parents…um I remember my mom was at the computer with me and said hey check these forms out and we applied and I got approved like instantly and I kind of took it from there

Excerpt #1 is a great example of the pressures parents put on kids to go to college. The language clearly supports this. D claims it wasn’t like she had to go, but then later states it was just something that seemed natural and understood as if D was supposed to go. This makes certain questions arise that drive cultural narratives. Is it that parents put pressure on their kids to go to college so society deems them “good parents”? Or does society put pressure on kids to go to college which in turn puts stress on the family to make this narrative come to truth?
This excerpt according sheds light on how the loan process is steamrolled and too easily accessible. Again D uses the words that “it was understood” she would have to take out a loan if she wanted to attend college. Like stated earlier, “loans allow the opportunity for everyone to get a college degree,” however, the fact that no other options are presented, and that taking out loans to pay for college is now a natural and socially accepted stigma begs the question of are loans truly the best options for our kids. We currently live in a world were of immediacy and instant gratification. Everything is a click away, even our approval for our student loans. This is dangerous and irresponsible but for who? Is it the parents and students faults for not reading the fine print? Or is the system set up in a way where the blame is forced on children and parents?

Excerpt # 3: Debt Drives Our Decisions and Puts Financial Pressure on Us

Me: did that fear of loan debt affect your choice of major or what field you went into?
D:  I always like the sciences I was originally a bio major and I was pre med cause I wanted to be a physician so I was like uhh it doesn’t matter how many loans I’m going to take out I will make it back after med school but that was never realized but as time went on and I found a field I most liked I looked into what was going to make the most money with that degree and I went into it with my masters.

She stutters a tiny bit in the beginning of her response but I think it was her wanting to answer truthfully. You could really tell she was carefully thinking when she gave her answer. It is also important to note how fear of debt is driving her will to be successful. What should be driving our student’s minds is their love or interest in their field or discipline. Is fear of loan debt driving D’s personal perspective or is it part of a bigger collective mindset?  Financial security is very important to everyone. Being able to comfortably support yourself or a family is deeply part of an American identity. There is no question that going into a field that pays well is a smart decision for the future. However, shouldn’t strengths and true interests in a subject draw us to pursue that certain field?
This excerpt also reveals the looming pressures of paying back student loans. She went into a pre-med program for two reasons, because she liked the sciences, and because it would make enough money to pay back her loans. Accordingly, when she realized she wasn’t going to continue with her pursue of med school, her decision to change was also rooted in making sure she was financially stable enough after college to pay back her loans. She states,” I found a field I most liked, I looked into what was going to make the most money with that degree and I went into it.” This shows her trying to balance her interests with having enough future stability, a balance that many students struggle to achieve in today’s educational system.

Conclusion

 Although the goal of this research wasn’t to solve the student loan debt crisis, it does shed light on the societal and cultural narratives that surround how and why students attend college. This study has shown that the system of higher education is set up in a way where blame of failure is shifted from the institutions, to the parents and kids. These pressures and cultural expectations perpetuate the debt bubble and leave students at a disadvantage. For a system that claims that loans provide opportunities to all kids around the country to better themselves, they fail to engage in a much needed dialogue of how the current economic landscapes has changed, and therefore, the model of attending college must change with it. Further research must be done in order to shift the mindset of young Americans and their want to attend college. Just like loans supposedly provide positive opportunities to all students, students should also be provided with all the information and tools necessary to shape their decisions to give them a better quality of opportunities later in life.

Limitations

Only one interview was done to open the door into the views and issues on student loan debt. This study reveals the cultural narratives surrounding college and if more students were interviewed, broader generalizations could have been drawn from the data. Sadly without an overhaul and reform of the education system in the U.S., students will continue to blindly adhere to a flawed and virtually broken system. Responsibility unfortunately falls on parents and students to fix a problem that the higher-ups have created. This issue is extremely important and without further development, students may soon find that it is not in their best interest to attend college. Education is crucial to advancing a culture, and further studies into these issues will help aid in avoiding this tipping point.

Bibliography
Best, E. (2012, July). Debt and the American Dream. Society. pp. 349-352.                                       doi:10.1007/s12115-012-9559-3.

Blog 19

Blog 19: post drafty writing for your introduction

Intro

In today’s society you have to attend college to be successful, and it is your parent’s responsibility to pay for it. These two cultural stories drive the student loan debt narrative that affects many aspects of a student’s life. The education system is built in a way that diverts blame from their unfair practices and money hungry parts towards parents and students. This study will shed light on; students preparation in attending college, their interactions with the loan process, the fear of loan debt and how it affects the American Dream and other decisions associated with school, stress between family members relating to affording school, and how the phrase, “Loans allow the opportunity for everyone to get a college degree” is both misleading and hindering the current societal mindset on higher education.

Blog 17

Blog 17: Post any data in addition to your transcript that you will use for your essay (additional interview materials, observational notes



I plan on doing a follow up interview or a possible interview of her younger brother who is still in college. That interview would serve as a basis of comparison between siblings in the same house in a normal sized family trying to put their kids through college and the differences between the two processes. I need to narrow down my sources I have too many. I also might do a survey to hand out in class about basic knowledge on student loans and some feelings that people have towards them.

Blog 16

Blog 16: post your updated research plan

My research plan is to focus on the cultural narrative that surround the loan and college process. My aim is to look more deeply at societal pressure, family pressure, and personal views on what it means to be successful. 

I have 3-4 sources I would like to use but might just focus on one.  My one source Mortgaging the Future:Student Debt in the Age of Austerity has a ton of great statistical information but nothing the digs into the cultural narrative that surround student loan debt.

Blog 14

Blog 14:  Do some more writing about what you will use as a focus for the short analysis project, and how the different excerpts with support/connect to that focus.  If you are stuck - ask questions/give me a hint about what kind of feedback you want as help.



For my short analysis I am going to look deeper at what goes into making decisions associated with school with debt looming as a stressor on those decisions. I want to look at how the language informs the anxieties that accompany the college process and how societal pressures affect our approach.

Blog 13

Blog 13: Analyze stories/excerpts from your transcript.  Select and post sections of your interview transcript which you might use to make a point in your essay. (you might need to listen to your recording to fill in words/make sure you have them right for these stories).   In this post, include:
 
 
 
 
 
 
-This section shows the expectations that parents put on their kids to attend college. The language supports this.

Me like any pressures or anything to go to college?
D uh I didn’t feel any pressure per say. It wasn’t likei had to go but I wanted to. I feel if I had ssaid I didn’t want to go that there would have been some push back from myparents.
Me so your parents were very stern about you going to college?
D um welli think it waskinda understood…it just seemednatural to go to college and I wanted to go into higher education and it was support 


-Location and affordability are important to most students and this may cloud our judgement in finding a school that is a perfect fit for the field we are most interested or strong in.

Me  yea I was going to get to a question like that. So what was the priority in choosing a school, was it strictly finiacial, location, or prestige or friends, or the
D it was location and affordability, not to mention Rutgers has a good name associated with it and I wanted to go to a bigger state school no matter what but the driving factor was affordability and location

           -This section is very important it revels the cultural narrative of parents looking after their kids during the college process and setting them up to attend. It also shows how this porcess is steamrolled with kids not getting all the info they need. It also shows how kids feel that the ONLY way they can attend college is by taking out loans.
Me was the loan process ever explained to you like going into college or even in high school prepping for college?
D um no um when it came down to me getting accepted It was understood that I would takeout a loan…
,e who told you about … that you had to take out a loan
D my parents…um I remember my mom was at the computer with me and said hey check these forms out and we applied and I got approved like instantly and I kind of took it from there
Me ok were there any consequences explaind to you like if you were to default on a loan
D no I mean
Me like did it feel like a big decision at the time orany pressure by it
D no no but it was my only option that if I wanted to go to school unless I wanted to go part time even though we didn’t discuss that, um if I wanted to be a full time student I would have to take out a loan and all I was told was that when you come out of college and you pay it atleast pay the minimum
And that was it

       -Here is an example on how fear of debt drives our decisions of what field we want to go into

 I always like the sciences I was originally a bio major  and I was pre med cause I wanted to be a physician so I was like uhh it doesn’t matter how many loans Im going to take out I will make it back after med school but that was never realized but as time went on and I found a field I most liked I looked into what was going to make themost money with that degree and I went into it with my masters.

     
       -This section focuses on how stressful having loand debt burden can be, and how this drives students want to do well not, that they are interested in being good at what they are doing.

Me ok so moving on um Rutgers um sorry, where there any pressures of your loan burdenthat wereaffecting your school work while attending Rutgers wasthat fear ever driving any of your school work?
D uhhhmm mmm uhmmm yea
Me was it affecting if you
D not exactly but there I wanna say my first year a year and a half there was a class or two I wouldn’t do   so well in and it would affect me like alomstas a personal failure more than anything but then I started to realize that I am paying for this myself and im taking out loans to fail is not a good feeling it seems like wastes of thousands of dollars. So I decided to take on more responsibility and accountability and it was almost like a kick in the butt and I um hey I gotta perform not only because I wantto do better but because its going to cost me money and its just gonnacost me more if I have to takethe class over